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i actually really like this

but - i feel that there is a side of you that you have abondoned - -this is really funny and really well made (animation-wise and coloring and...yadda yadda yadda) - but i feel that you and i were up and coming RIGHT at the same time - - and i remember a lot from you - - a series you were gonna do called "Alex" and it seems that that has died off in place of creating spoof cartoons on video games and memes - - i hope you get back to making those ideas that you have and creating things that you thought of - -and yes - - i realize that you likely hate my cartoons and will probably call me a fagot or a pussy in this review, which is JUST HILARIOUS. but i really would like to see that series that you once wanted to make

i've always been a fan of your stuff - all the best

red

psychicpebbles responds:

I'm actually working on a MASSIVE series that I've been working on with my friend Patrick and NG user AlmightyHan's for over a year. I'm trying the BEST that I can to write a well written and clever story, even if the humor aspect fails. I'm very adamant about making the story completely flawless, no loopholes, well written, good character arc, good character development, the works. So like I said, even if it's totally unfunny, it's still a well told story. The humor for said show also won't be to this degree of "shock" humor, I guess if you want to call it that.

We're working on this as we speak, but until we start, I'm going to make a few more short wacky videos and parodies.

As I said, a series is 100% underway, and I'm sure you'll love it. I appreciate the review man!

splendid as always

though this happens to me sometimes - you should make one about the inverse - - the "having waaaayyy to many ideas, and not nearly enough equipment or time"

CHEERS

this is definitely my

favorite submission of yours to date!

i love how it flows in and out of rhyming rap-like verses and singing - and just random talking and dancing = =

brilliant

Sexual-Lobster responds:

thanks!

nice work man!

i think sound effects could really take this to the next level though

hmm - here's my thoughts

I guess you can kinda consider this a response to you and psycicpebbles chat.

(love both of you guys - heres my two cents)

First of all i Loved this - i thought the pacing was nailed - i never really felt an akward moment and always felt the story continuing forward and keeping it engaging

1. art - i find it HUGELY unfair for people to criticize art saying things like "its rushed" or "its not anatomically correct" - - every thing that comes out isnt gonna look like harry partridge. Some people have their own styles and own ways of handling characters. just because its not AMAZING johnny utah art doesnt mean it doesnt serve its purpose for its intended use.

2- animation - i think the way animation was used in this was a perfect complement to the style of the toon - - it was CLEARLY a hybrid between an rpg/mmorpg and an action style cartoon - the point was driven home perfectly - -i think there was a great mixture of fbf actiong and clever use of dialogue placed throuout

3- characters - yes the characters are magnified. But something people dont unerstand is, when making a series, certain measures need to be taken to give characters their life - - this isnt a 26 ep long series on tv - -and personally - i think the one shot looks we got at the characters left me with a great understanding of who they are and even a fondness for a few.

- - i would go into more but im starting to rant

***and to amend the overused phrase - if you dont like this. just dont watch....but then you may be stuck watching nothing on newgrounds ever besides JohnnyUtah, Egoraptor, and Harrypartridge.***

overall - i really enjoyed this and thought it was a light and fun and original toon that really gets me excited to see whats next! - keep it up kirb! this gives me great hope for my own series as well!

~RED

nice

but... no need to co author us for stuff we aren't acting in -people might wanna go check out this stuff to hear our voice work and be disappointed to find that we aren't in it : )

DingoWalleyStudio responds:

True, but I felt like I should include all the cast for the preview because I didn't want them to be left out. Thanks again though for being in my cartoon though :D

awesome work!

slick style and great pacing! - - i would love to see some voice work added in! plenty of amazing talent on the site!

keep it up

QuasimodoxArt responds:

Thanks!

Lots of talented people here indeed.

nice!

can't say that i know any of these new generation pokemon(cuz they all blow)

but your style is really cleaning up and looking great!

keep it up

OnionsXD responds:

I think Sudowoodo was only in the second generation. lol

Thanks though! It's great to hear that I'm improving! :D

interesting

this is pretty good - - i think your ideas and drawing skills are there - but whats missing is a bit of production value - - i think if you spent an extra few days to get different voice actors (all the voices are the same person ..least thats what it sounds like), and take a second look at the pacing you would have a really solid thing here

also consider adding music or ambient noise? - - but overall a good start, if you can stick with it ; )

Deer50 responds:

thanks. I wanted to add a soundtrack. But I don't want to steal anybody's music.

i'm not too sure man..

i watched the first episode so this is for both - - i am starting my own series as well and i know its difficult - so my main advice is to really take the time to explain who the characters are and where things are taking place and make sure its clear

cuz i was confused as shit

i can tell though that you have putt a lot of effort into this - so keep it up and try really intregrating more explanation so its clear to all the viewers!

AWWWW shit son...

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